Mason Application (Take Two)

[VlperX]

Your maze really confused me. It didn't tell me at the start what the frames and pages were about. Was I meant to collect them? if so, how do they return when I'm done with them? At the end, I find it stupendously easy to cheat because it was obvious one trapdoor was different from the other three. When I got to the end, there was no way out.. and if I did happen to chose the wrong trapdoor, what sense is there in dropping me into the vast emptiness of the mundane cube? Also, it was shit easy.

The Mason application requires at least two examples of your work, both to be judged and must both be accepted. I'd like to see something else.

Sorry to be like this, but I don't believe in withholding my opinion from developing minds. This world will not treat you any different.
Accept it as a challenge to improve. Otherwise your goals will not be achievable.

[Eleves_202]

The pages are from the actual game Slender, in which you have to find 8 of them hidden around the map. They are not supposed to be collected, only found. The point of the drop was to kill the player, since it is about 24 blocks to the bottom. After the 2 questions, you just teleport out, like with most of the games. There is a king's hall that I built based off of Viva la Vida, and a giant painting of SlenderMan. I can post pics of both together, since I still need more.[hr]
They may not be up until tomorrow though, I have a lot of stuff I have to do first.[hr]
For whatever I build next, maybe a volcano, I will need another plot. I used mine up and there is no room to expand it.

[Eleves_202]

To finally prove myself, I am attempting one last ditch build. An epic volcano made of obsidian and spouting out lava.

[VlperX]

I would advise against that. It's not a good idea. It requires an absolute mother load of attention to detail to attempt something like a volcano and have it actually looking original.

[Eleves_202]

Then what would you suggest? I guess the vlcano idea is a bit overused. I could build Moby Dick, but that is not origional either. I'm fresh out of ideas for now. I need a good 15 minutes to get a great idea.

[Eleves_202]

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These are of SlenderPainting, a giant representation of a painting in the game that i changed to look like SlenderMan.

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And these last six are of the King's Hall, based off of Viva la vida by Coldplay. Inside the chest is a key, which is mentioned in the song. I forgot to add that there is also a giant cloud on top with Saint Peter and the gates of Hevean. On Peter's desk is a book with the names of who can and can't enter. Under the cloud are the Jerusalem Bells from the song. I forgot to take pictures of them and will get them up tomorrow.[hr]
the cloud can be seen in the first picture at the top left corner of the shot.

[rth081094]

It's ok. However the building seems a little to dark for my likings. Also the guillotine doesn't work or at least it didn't work when I tried it.

[Saintethan]

Well, you kind of messed up the symbolism used in the song, but the build is nice nonetheless.

[Eleves_202]

It is a little dark, but is supposed to medieval looking. I fixed the guillotine so now it is button activated. This allows the piston to retur to normal extended position so people can't jump up and out. [hr]
I finished the Boxing Kangaroos. They will be up tomorrow afternoon.

[Eleves_202]

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